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Neverending Haiku chain: Part 2

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The Anointed
 
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Reply Thu 5 Dec, 2024 12:09 am
@edgarblythe,
as the planet roasts
and the seas evaporate
all life is destroyed.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 6 Dec, 2024 09:00 am
@The Anointed,
all life is destroyed
what else can we write about
when we all are dead
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Lash
 
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Reply Fri 6 Dec, 2024 12:27 pm
When we are all dead
under the seventh pole-shift,
what life will reach up?
The Anointed
 
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Reply Fri 6 Dec, 2024 08:59 pm
@Lash,
what life will reach up
From the dead world of mankind
But the mind of man.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 6 Dec, 2024 11:16 pm
@The Anointed,
but the mind of man
it may never understand
the folly of war
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2024 05:31 pm
@edgarblythe,
the folly of war
surely you are not saying
wars cannot be right.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2024 05:49 pm
@The Anointed,
wars cannot be right
"all wars, all, are wars of greed"
- a warrior of peace
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2024 06:17 pm
@edgarblythe,
a warrior of peace
must know that to create peace
Sometimes one must fight.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2024 06:51 pm
@The Anointed,
sometimes one must fight
against killing his brother
in short eat the rich
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2024 09:21 pm
@edgarblythe,
in short eat the rich
who suppress and starve the poor
so off with their heads
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2024 11:56 pm
@The Anointed,
so off with their heads
cried the poor starving people
to their wealthy Lords.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2024 10:50 am
@The Anointed,
to their wealthy lords
we render unto Caesar
and a little bit more
The Anointed
 
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Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2024 05:24 pm
@edgarblythe,
6 syllables on your last line

a little bit more
cried the wealthy and fat ones
a little bit more.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 10 Jan, 2025 08:40 pm
@The Anointed,
a little bit more
cockerel on a dung heap
the king of the hill
Lash
 
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Reply Sat 11 Jan, 2025 06:22 am
The king of the hill
surveys his charred mountain lair.
His life, burned to ash.

edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 11 Jan, 2025 09:44 am
@edgarblythe,
edgarblythe wrote:

a little bit more
cockerel on a dung heap
the king of the hill

The center line is a quote from H G Wells' History of the World. He was referring to Napoleon at the height of his conquests.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 11 Jan, 2025 09:47 am
@Lash,
his life burned to ash
ah, but unlike Joan of Arc
his body unsinged
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 12 Jan, 2025 01:54 am
@edgarblythe,
his body unsinged
his coffin burned to a crisp
as he walked away
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 13 Jan, 2025 03:49 pm
@The Anointed,
as he walked away
a sniper took aim and fired
another martyred
The Anointed
 
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Reply Mon 13 Jan, 2025 11:22 pm
@edgarblythe,
another martyred
with his one hundred virgins
but with no penis
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