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Thu 21 Jul, 2005 08:27 am
If anyone steals it I'll sue! LOL!
"It's not right!" I scream as you take my hand
Silencing all my fears for now
I know you try but you don't understand
I've got to give you up somehow
I can't keep fighting the voice in my head
It's just tearing me up inside
It's gonna take forever to forget
So I have to end it tonight
Chorus:
So let me go, don't make it hard
This is how it has to be
We'll walk away with painful scars
Just forget the memories
We knew from the start it would have to end
Why did we even want to try?
But now there's no use in playing pretend
The time has come to say goodbye
So give me back my old, worn-out letters
If you read them you'll remember
I'll give you back your old, worn-out sweater
And we'll put out these last embers
Chorus:
So let me go, don't make it hard
This is how it has to be
We'll walk away with painful scars
Just forget the memories
Y'all tell me what ya think!
Slow down, it takes us a while to get to you.
This has been done, that said, it's not horrible but it's not great. Where's the time signature? The sheet music proving this can even be sung at all? The lyrics lack insight or imagery, they don't inspire me or make me feel anything.
If the singer involed had one hell of a voice this could be another decent, but angsty pop-punk song.
Ok... anyone else have any comments?
aright dis is poem style ya end rhymes need ta match in a song and your verses need to be extended do another one following wat i jus said den get back at me iight
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