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What do we do?

 
 
medra
 
Reply Wed 20 Jul, 2005 10:51 am
im thinking about how we move forward in life, move forward with life, why do we know what this is and how to do it, but why do we not, why do we say we couldnt, ****- this pisses me off, the easiest thing we can do is make a decision/or not, and it seems as though they make us most of the time, be aware enough to know that this is what you are doing/or not, make something happen, however it happens, just like a thought, go to school for an education that means someting to you more than money, dont buy **** you dont need, dont get caught up in this world of greed, get off the computer and go outside, this is the only place you can be truely alive, go outside and attempt to breathe - a real breath is what you need, air that clears your head and feeds your soul - is air that you feel and is air that you know, this is what you bleed, something that is in you and something that you are of, nothing more, nothing less, neither under or above - You.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jul, 2005 02:27 pm
Hey...I like what you're saying here.....it was a little hard to read though, being it was all clumped together...but I like it. :wink:
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medra
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jul, 2005 11:10 pm
thank you!
thank you, yeah i kind of have a habit of making things hard for myself and everyone else, as i think it should be sometimes, but mostly its very simple, words, life... so i dont worry about the difficult unless i make it, thats someting to worry about.'

medra
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Reply Thu 21 Jul, 2005 06:14 am
Er yeah, it's a very important message that you are putting across there, Medra, however i agree with 'stand up for permission' it is kinda hard to get to grips with your writing style. Furthermore, I don't 100% agree with what you are saying. Different people feel alive in different ways. Otherwise, this planet would be boring. More boring than it already is.
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medra
 
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Reply Thu 21 Jul, 2005 12:00 pm
alive
very understandable, i think with the idea of go outside and breathe, was to say not exactly that, different outsides for everyone, different truths for everyone, i cant really say that this planet is boring, i would say it is more ignorant than boring,that might make it seem boring, people trying to live their lives to a fuller extent wouldnt have anything to do with boring would it?, yeah i dont think i even have a writting style its more confined thoughts than a style, so i will attempt to unravel them more in the future, unlike right now i guess, lol, thank you for your imput waterhalo, very much appreciated!

medra
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