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FlashFiction (Inner Turmoil)

 
 
SomGirl
 
Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2005 05:11 pm
I'm put on the display table and dissected by a friend. I cry; he enjoys it. I feel crushed, so I cry. Again I'm faced off against him and my heart drops from exhaustion. Cut; cut; cut, I'm pulled apart. Sliced and destroyed, I'm mutilated from the analyzing -hideous. It's not me. It's too broken to be ME. I'm only me when all the pieces fit together. They almost fit; push until they do…snap. They break: I break.

I'm fairly certain there's a lot of technical errors but I thought the emotions portrayed was at least decent. Walla!
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neologist
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jun, 2005 08:56 am
I hate those folks who are not satisfied unless they see me on the inside. If I had wanted them to see my insides, I'd have eaten them. Very Happy
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SomGirl
 
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Reply Wed 29 Jun, 2005 04:27 pm
Me too! It's no fun..I just might have to eat them too!
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