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Let it go (I died)

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Reply Sat 25 Jun, 2005 11:03 pm
Throw me in the raging river
See if i can swim.

Undertoe wash over me
Suck me further in.

I don't think i'm breathing now
My heart is beating slow.

Unconsciously i'm screaming now
Let it, let it, let it go.

Let it, let it, let it go
I----Died, I----Died.
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Reply Sun 26 Jun, 2005 06:49 am
Good morning, Stand up. It's been a while since I have seen you, and I just wanted to say hello and comment on your poem.

Quite moving, my dear, and very well written.
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Reply Sun 26 Jun, 2005 09:39 am
Aww, how sweet of you Letty. I'm doing lots of traveling this summer, so not alot of time for the net although I do miss it here, and pop in when I can.

Thanks for stopping by,
Pessy
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