Vex86
 
Reply Sun 19 Jun, 2005 06:41 pm
True peace is found inside,
Not without.

Its found in the mind,
And in the soul.
Where only calmness grows.

Peace is that place inside,
Where time stands still,
And the heart beat is heard

This peace never leaves,
And can never be takin away.
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 20 Jun, 2005 07:05 am
Thoughtful prose, Vex86,

Your thoughts sound more like the forum on philosophy, so I went there to comment , OK?

Your writing is fine, just need to use spellcheck, (as in 'taken')

And I never knew people FELT their heartbeat, except when they had been RUNNING or extremely physically stressed. At peace, all I hear is inner quiet. hmmmmm?

Peace
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