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Reply Wed 1 Jun, 2005 09:02 am
Who are they?!

Everything suggests that they are some sort of underground or maybe aliens!
Obviously that today the twentieth of March –started two hours ago- has a great momentous for them; religious or national. It also seems that they are bound to gather here from all parts of the world, today exactly. It’s a mission that they could be killed for it.

I also can say that they don’t like each other, and it's not really important for them to help each other to be here. It was clear that the major wasn't excited about the old man entering the house. Besides, the couple warned the old man from one of them when he showed them one of his photographs.

From where did they come?!

Pity that there is only one answer. The odd amulet, and the weapon made of a metal which isn't found on Earth. All are things that only have one meaning; theses are strangers, these aren’t from our world, these aren’t from our Earth, and probably aren’t from our galaxy!

I've started to examine the V weapon that they talked about. Perhaps it would be an aid for me to defend myself. As I said it's not provided with a firelock or anything that opens and closes. I saw Jason pressing it but I didn't see anything come out of it.
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Reply Wed 1 Jun, 2005 12:45 pm
Interesting possibilities here. I see it as the first draft of an introduction. There are many problems with word use and sentence structure. I hope you will be able to work these out as I would be interested in the story.
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