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The new me

 
 
Reply Tue 31 May, 2005 07:36 am
You were here and there,
You came, sat and said,
You looked at me
Every now and then,
Time passed,
Life goes on....
so i thought...
with some ripples here and there..
But there came a bang that made me sit up and think
What a fool's world i lived in.
I had a dream that i lost track midway,
I had a vision
That slowly blurred away.
where do i go from here
Lost and caught within myself
I begin to dream again
New dreams, with a new me
I ask for directions
Only to realize they are not there
You will come someday
I will be here
A new me is what you will see.
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neologist
 
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Reply Tue 31 May, 2005 09:16 am
Welcome to the forum, bhavna. I look forward to reading your work.
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Tue 31 May, 2005 11:47 am
Welcome bhavna!

It's got a nice content... not necessarily the best style of writing... but that just could be because i'm in a distracted mood anyway!
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