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Original Poem: 'Villa'

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jjorge
 
Reply Mon 30 May, 2005 06:00 am
Villa



It's time,

I've learned enough.

I'm going from the world awhile

to my imagined Villa,



I cannot wait to see it,

Queen Ann's lace,

and careless Daisies,

will smile as I pass,



On a hill,

Happy ruminants,


Deep peace in a heaven of grass.

-jjorge
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 30 May, 2005 07:38 am
daydream believer? I go there myself.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 30 May, 2005 07:56 am
Idyllic - beautiful.
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Piffka
 
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Reply Tue 31 May, 2005 03:12 pm
I'll say... very nice, Jjorge.

Happy ruminants... Very Happy Ruminants are always happiest when they're ruminating.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 31 May, 2005 09:51 pm
Ah, here's the meadow..
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