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Wed 18 May, 2005 07:28 am
This is a poem about that feeling of inadequacy you get while you watch somebody sleeping, and they just seem perfect
Broken Angel
1. Don't touch me
Not tonight
You're perfect
Just sitting there
Don't try to hold me
It's not worth it
Don't spoil this picture
Just for me
Chorus
Don't keep on hanging on
I'm holding you back
Just try to carry on
With the things that you have
Cos I just don't belong
Lying there beside you
So don't touch me
Don't hold me
Tonight
2. Don't kiss me
Not this way
You're like an angel
Just lying there
Don't try to keep me
I was never worth it
Don't break the photograph
For me
3. Don't love me
Not like this
You're so flawless
Just sleeping there
Don't say you want me
It won't work
Don't lose it all
Because of me
by Bekaboo
12/05/05
Bekaboo
You've captured all those emotions of feeling unworthy while being passionately in love.
It feels as though it should be set to music. Have you thought about that?
As it happens this is one of te ones that i already partially did: often while i'm writing i get a tune in my head - i haven't got a chord patter yet but yes it's on the way
Thank-you!!
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