Wow, nice one!!
I wondered in this line
Quote:Ethereal fire me, waiting to be free
What you were meaning to say? Is me a misprint or should fire be a verb?
Really loved this line:
Quote:Your time approaches, oh ancient soul within
And this line:
Quote:When that happy past, dissolves like fragile foam
Broken marble bust, scum of time owns it
Buried, nature claimed it all, again life cheats
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