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His Diary

 
 
Reply Sun 15 May, 2005 07:38 pm

His Bible of emotions
He visits with religious devotion
I wish I were his diary
So he'd share those intimate thoughts with me
His never ending personal interview
Always getting rave reviews
No judges, no jury
Just his doodling done with artistic fury
Upon that paper his innermost feelings does he spill
His private place that I will never fill.

Julie M. Minor

Copyright ©2005 Julie M. Minor
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Reply Mon 16 May, 2005 12:23 am
I was enjoying this until the last line

Sorry i have the mind of a porn star Razz
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