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Sun 15 May, 2005 07:13 pm
Love Me Tender
Love Me Tender
Love me with all of your passionate splendor
Take me into your mystical world
For in your presence my head does twirl
Let me see the ways of your soul
share with me your rock and roll
Lay me down underneath the stars
While serenading me with your guitar
Sing me a ditty, as I fall deeper in love
The constellations being aligned above
As you take me into your universe
Love me tender, for in you I am totally immersed.
Julie M. Minor
Copyright ©2005 Julie M. Minor
Now
that i like. It flows, in a nice rhythm and it has some nice, more unconventional images.
I like
Quote:Let me see the ways of your soul
share with me your rock and roll
And
Quote:Lay me down underneath the stars
While serenading me with your guitar
My only objection is to the word "twirl" - i even think "swirl" would be better at this point
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