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Oh oh... i think i wrote something happy... I'm scared

 
 
Bekaboo
 
Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 11:11 am
Untitled Mark 2!!

I felt you plant a kiss
Upon my cherry lips
Take a step back
As I closed my eyes in bliss
I felt you hold my hand
With love I could not miss
And take me far away
Just for tonight

I felt you hold me close
Your warmth diffusing in
Like darts of lovers' breath
Beneath my very skin
I felt you cleanse my soul
and take away my sin
And fuse your soul with mine
Just for tonight

I felt you read my mind
As your eyes met mine
And my heart grew some wings
As it reached out to thine
I heard you make us one
With words so strong and fine
And own me alone
Just for tonight

By Bekaboo
14/05/05
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 02:38 pm
Beka, that was amazing, I almost had a soul of it's soul, it was pure beauty ^.^
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 03:15 pm
I agree, I loved it!
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 03:36 pm
Pessy!!! I haven't talked to you in forever!
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neologist
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 05:41 pm
You wouldn't be bipolar, would you? http://web4.ehost-services.com/el2ton1/sun.gif
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 07:10 pm
tear_jerked_punk wrote:
Pessy!!! I haven't talked to you in forever!


Hey, no doubt! I'm not on a2k much anymore Sad Nice to see you though!
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2005 04:19 am
Lol moi? Nah not bipolar Razz HEAVY moodswings yet but i havent reached the realms of manic depressive Razz I just find it easiest to write at the extremes of emotion: so you guys don't ever see the moseying-along-just-carry-on-living version of me most of the world sees. You get landed with the raw emotion when i'm damn pissed off, horribly lonely or beaming with sunshine Very Happy
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