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Bekaboo
 
Reply Thu 12 May, 2005 02:56 pm
I'm not a freak.... honest.... Razz Laughing

Feel the mist creep through my veins
Release my shackles
Open my mouth
I gasp
As the incubi grips my stomach
Digs nails of fog inside of me
Draws a jet of scarlet
Spattering on my spread hands
As I gasp
And struggle to breathe
The acrid smoke filling my aching lungs
My eyes fluttering wildly
I tilt my head back
Welcoming the release
But biting my lip against the vivid exposure
My heart pounds in my ears
Making me dizzy and sick
Toes curl and bunch upon the floor
Slick with sweat
I need this release

by Bekaboo
12/05/05

And in case you wondered the title is The night before.... my German interpreting A-level exam is in just under 15 hours Surprised
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neologist
 
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Reply Thu 12 May, 2005 03:13 pm
Xamophobic, eh?
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Thu 12 May, 2005 03:24 pm
Lol i shouldn't be - I cut straight As!!! German is the one subject where straight As would be a surprise in fact. But I get MAJOR exam nerves - helps me perform... hence the welcome of the release
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neologist
 
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Reply Thu 12 May, 2005 03:31 pm
I always did better in a test or contest. Adrenalin helps you concentrate, I think.
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 04:16 am
I really enjoyed this poem. Great flow.

AE
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