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Guess what my poem is about...

 
 
Reply Thu 12 May, 2005 12:40 pm
Its his #1 ego booster
Now hes in insomnia
Hes in deep euphoria
And hes got real nausea

His pulse rate has gone up
Though his breathing has slowed down
Hes lost all his expensive things
And hes always got a frown

Hes seen a lot of things
That no one else has saw
Hes numb and hes hurting
As hes stretched out on the floor
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neologist
 
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Reply Fri 13 May, 2005 09:47 am
Some sort of religion?
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basket case
 
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Reply Fri 13 May, 2005 10:00 am
nope it aint a religion
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neologist
 
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Reply Fri 13 May, 2005 10:26 am
Strung out on something else?
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basket case
 
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Reply Fri 13 May, 2005 10:31 am
tell me more
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neologist
 
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Reply Fri 13 May, 2005 10:39 am
I find it interesting how some religious experiences resemble a drug induced trance. That's not to mention the religions who rely on drugs to achieve enlightenment. The end results are strikingly similar:
You lose your valuable things -
You're numb and hurting -
You're powerless on the floor
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basket case
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 03:25 am
its nothing to do with religion
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basket case
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 03:25 am
i was hoping to put across the effects drugs take on people
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neologist
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 08:34 am
basket case wrote:
i was hoping to put across the effects drugs take on people
Of course; but I don't think my analogy missed the point.
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Sat 14 May, 2005 09:38 am
Nor do I... after what neo said I could see it was about drugs... but the analogy stood alone
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basket case
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 11:58 am
it didn't miss the point
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Algis Kemezys
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 12:24 pm
Well it's not about THIS_____________ or this___________because if it were ,then this___________would be true.
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neologist
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 06:21 pm
Well, blankety blank blank and durn it all too!
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