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Tue 10 May, 2005 12:16 pm
Whenever I opened My eyes
She faced like a lord and
was standing in front of me
A rainy day without Umbrella
She made me drousy
and proved through her beauty, this is your Love
Life was solitary
She sneaked in to my life
Beautiful moment ,
Oh Oh I am stuck in to it
There are many ways to escape from her
but I can't
Your name is Unknown
Your Location is Unknown
Does a cute bird need a Name?
I am watching at you without knowing her
Does a moon realise what's going on in
a beautiful Lake?
I realise that my mind is carriying two life
Is this true Love?
I realise that I Blush
Is this True Love?
Whenever she walked on Her way
Post Lights loves to wink at her
If she bath in a Lake
Fishes might get Fever
Whenever I touche you, thunder will flash at me
Eventhough if Volcano come
Feelings are very strong
Whenever she crashed in to my life
I was bended like a wall
Oh oh oh oh oh oh
Edit [Moderator]: Moved from Poetry to Original Writing.
Okay i'm guessing this is meant to be a song, rather than a poem
Sort out the spelling and grammar in places
I think it's a little unorganised to be honest, and the feel of it changes so often it's hard to get a grip on it
Yea true....
this is not a poem
..But i like this songs...
Lot of meaning.....so thats ya i translated
Its not mine writing or own ideas..I just wanne show how beautiful this song was lol
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