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Sun 8 May, 2005 04:41 am
Black eyes
Black smile
I don't know how to say this
You're leaving
In a while
You didn't tell me but I feel
The way you're slipping from me
The way you're moving further each day
The way you're running from me
I'm falling now
But i can't look down
It's gonna be another lonely night
Lying all alone without you
I don't feel right without you by my side
But let's face it neither did you
It's gonna be another day of nightmares
I wish you were here to fight
But you never really wanted me
So now i've got to do what just feels right
Cut wrists
Blood flowing
This isn't what you asked for, but I see
Eyes shut
Pulse flowing
I couldn't take rejection one day more
As you kept slipping from me
Moving further and further every day
You just keep running from me
I'm falling now
But i can't look down
It's gonna be another hellish night
Lying cold and lonely without you
I won't feel right without you here
But being here wasn't for you
It's gonna be another bleeding nightmare
I wish you wanted to fight
But you never really cared for me
So now i've got to do what just feels right
Mmmm I didn't have a good weekend...
P.S Any ideas for a title?
I know your words are authentic. I'm afraid that by suggesting a title, I might give them finality.
Wow - profound
Don't worry about it: i have ups and downs... currently on an up (German exam went really well
) so at the moment my poem seems rather trvial...
I'm old enough to be your grandfather, so don't misunderstand this: I feel for you.
Believe me I don't misunderstand it - i've come to value your opinion greatly, and it's nice to feel that somebody empathises with me
How about "Can't look Down" Something to remember when you have those down days. Don't look down try to look up.
AE
Well it's the only suggestion I've had so far!! Any opposed??
Try to remember what was going on through your mind the minute you decided to write the poem, and you might get an idea for the tittle.
I don't have a suggestion, but your words made me feel the emotions of this.......
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