Bekaboo
 
Reply Sat 30 Apr, 2005 04:34 pm
Let's see what happens when i'm not mad, just tired...

I'm listening to the Sound of Silence
Only not the one in D minor
The hum that keeps me awake at night
Like the drones from the summer of '93
I'm laughing at a lyric you can't hear
Except it wasn't funny when you sang it
And it's more of a self conscious smile
Than the release you normally give me
I'm shrugging as i bite my lip
And stare into blue, too light to be your eyes
The bells are ringing out tonight
But not for my saviour
Not for a 9th Symphony
Just embracing the quiet
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neologist
 
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Reply Sat 30 Apr, 2005 04:55 pm
I'm a superficial person. But when I read your work I detect a profound sadness or sense of loss.
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Sun 1 May, 2005 07:23 am
Damn and there was me thinking i hid it so well Razz Other opinions anyone?
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