3 Original Songs by me.

Give me some feedback if you could, would be appreciated greatly.
Posting 3 songs, first sounds good with the beat, not sure what the lyrics will be thought of. second just having some fun, being a geez. Last one a bit different. They aren't the most proffessional of works, but enjoy.

You are pop art
You are crystal movement
You are everything acrylic, into it, video swoop ink
You are swirling hairdo
You are vital organs
You believe, believe, believe, believe..
You are faux post- modern
You are often crying
You are impressionist, into this, tenuously confident
You are four syllables
You are psychotically equitable
You leave me everywhere, no where, over there, thank you
You are smoking, health care
You are love heart, flow chart
You are flashing, graphing, tabbing my discrepancies
Feel your fingers moving
You are leaving me
( )
You are leaving me
( )
You are leaving me



How is it just and how can it be?
That she, my true love
that she, giver of hope
That she, my most adored
Forgets I'm there.
At first, yeah, I laughed
When you pretended to not see me
But it's gone on way too long now
Something's wrong, something's wrong with love
Cause I know it's not just us (not our red hot fuss)
Oh ow! Love is blind
Someone call a surgeon
Love is blind
Need to operate urgent
For the love of mankind
(Love is b, b, blind! x 3)

You can never hear me when I call your name
It was pretty loud inside though, Yeah, I think it was
I bought you a present, had to get out a loan
But since you got that caller I.D, you're never at home
This ****'s gone on pretty long, is somethin' wrong?
See you aren't listening...oh ow...
Love aint blind, Love is deaf
Something's wrong with love
I knew it wasn't just us
Love is deaf (since when)
And needs support (right now)
When love can't hear (doctor, please!)
t t t t that's when shhhhh

Saw you in the street today
With some guy and yeah
You were holding hands, I thought he's your cousin
I tried to say hello but uh, he was playing a little rough
I guess your cousin is pretty tough
It aint us
no, no it aint just us
love is blind, deaf and tough
uh uh
I guess love is pretty tough huh
My bones are brittle so leave me be
Call the nurse (driver of the hearse)
(Way tougher than me, huh)
Cause love is dead
Cause love is dead
l, l, l, love is d, d, d, dead



I'm pulling my head out of the ground
Holding on to the movements with sounds
Sugar pill, don't want to talk now
Pulling in, vomiting in the sink now
Walk 3 blocks, show I care
God knows what's in him, I'm prepared
Should I be scared that I'll lose a grasp of what's real?
Usually I'd want to stay home but
somehow they get through to me with
(People always) Pushing and screaming
and now and again, I want to feel needed
But I don't want to talk now
Don't make me talk now
No cathedral close, won't say a prayer now
Heard so many things, Been taught, let it go
The boy's here, he's wearing your clothes
Parallel figures, never touching
Tracing circles, pretending to be young
Then black spots guide you back to the neo-ground
Mirror reflections, walking back to town
And you need him , he don't need you, but you feed it , won't let it go
He's clenched in your hands , disappearing through a gash
He's pushing you further into the clouds
But the ride up isn't half the way down
Now look who's so low, they walk overhead
Don't want to talk now
I'll just feed on my thoughts now
Keep your head up, I never do
Looking up is always worse than keeping low