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To Whom it May Concern.....

 
 
Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 06:36 pm
I will no longer hide behind myself
To impress you or anyone else.

I will speak my mind
even when you won't listen.

I'll stop apologizing for other
peoples mistakes.

For no longer will I sacrifice
my happiness to ensure your own.

To whom it may concern.
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 06:58 pm
I like it. As long as it doesn't concern me.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 07:04 pm
Cool Gus....

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As long as it doesn't concern me.


Love this line by the way!!....hehe, it's great!

And just so we all know......this poem shouldn't concern anyone, it's just a statement.....
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littlek
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 07:04 pm
then why is it so scary?
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 07:11 pm
littlek wrote:
then why is it so scary?


I don't look at it as scary, more like evolving into myself instead of what others want me to be.....not scary at a......wait...that could be scary.....I dunno Rolling Eyes
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littlek
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 07:12 pm
I'm kidding (sort of). It seems a very liberating poem and a good one for many of us to keep to heart.
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pinkpants111
 
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Reply Tue 26 Apr, 2005 07:35 pm
wow that was really nice i liked it!!
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Wed 27 Apr, 2005 10:17 am
Really really liked it. I wish i'd written it - it kinda sounds like i feel i think - if that makes sense.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 27 Apr, 2005 08:10 pm
Thanks guys....for me, it's like my inner self coming to terms with my outer self.....if that makes sense....lol
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Thu 28 Apr, 2005 12:49 am
It makes perfect sense... but like i said... it sounds like me Wink hehe well done for writing something that .... 'speaks to me' <--cheesy i know!!
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plainclothes man
 
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Reply Thu 28 Apr, 2005 01:05 am
Last line dynomite
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