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Satyr
 
Reply Sun 10 Apr, 2005 07:54 am
I am not a child of a "lesser god"; I am not a condemned infidel destined to pay for his unbelieving insolence by grovelling at the feet of faith; I am a symbol of my creators need, a humble soldier in a holy army, a hopeful incarnation of sacred secret dreams.
Here I stand weak but unyielding, imperfect but proud, scared but brave.
It is my ideal that makes me so; it is my hopes and dreams that make me more.

My gods have earned their peak; they've proven themselves in battles against Titans and they do not just hold dominion over the creations in their own imaginings.

I am not a child of a "lesser god"; my gods do not promise me summits, if I were to just lie down and die in the mud. I must earn my heights, I must pay for my ascension with blood, sweat and tears, and I must prove myself as a worthy receiver for their kindness.

Until then it is their scorn that I feel. They fling lightning against me and laugh as I scramble to escape. Their cruelty washes over me like a flame that burns away excess fat and unwanted prejudices; I am burned hard by their indifference as I climb towards them.

These Olympian slopes speak of my recompense; they bear witness to my struggle.
These rocks are soiled with my flesh; one can chart my course using the blood trail I leave behind me.
I am tempted to sit and surrender to my body's need; every molecule within me screams for comfort, for rest, for an end to this climb but I will not allow myself to give in to fear and discomfort as most others have. I will not sit and excuse myself using childish illusions and adult delusions; I will be man.
The summit calls to me.

Those beneath me, dance unknowingly at the foothills; they cast insults and mock me in my insolence, to have even considered such an ambition, they build armour with their insecurities and weapons with their sense of inferiority and seek to entice me back down to their meaningless merriment, in order to justify their own inability to even attempt such a climb.
They do not comprehend my descriptions of the views from up here. How could they?
For them the world is flat and the horizons distant and hazy; mountains obstacles to be levelled into dust and used to build temples to their submission.
But I see panoramas that lift my soul. I breathe winds that cleanse my lungs. I feel sunlight upon my face and the rapture of being in my chest.

Limits are not flames to be avoided. Limits are destinations to be reached for.
I will not exist in the middle of my ability and search for the easy route that does not challenge my strengths.
It is in search of whom I am that I climb towards and this can only be judged by reaching my limits and wanting to go beyond them, above them; to stretch them into new positions, to redefine myself and give nobility to the human spirit.

I am not a child of a ?'lesser god'; I am a human being.
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turtlette
 
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Reply Tue 12 Apr, 2005 01:57 am
Well done!

I know what it's like to take the road less traveled/high road. Some folks have allowed it to be ingrained in their minds eye to look up, over and beyond.

Do we have choices? I believe so, but it's like this (for me.)

The high road verses the low road.

Both roads are good because they lead to the top. Each road has gold and gems along the sides. The high road is difficult but has more gold/gems. Why would there be more gold/gems on this road? Because it's less traveled so the bounty lays untouched, it just sits there and glistens. How does one know there are gems in them there hills in the first place? The sun refracts off of them and creates a prism/rainbow for all to see, all one has to do is stop for a second and look with a keen eye, and then be willing to make this kind of journey to acquire the goods.

The high road has magnificent views, but it's steep and craggy, it teaches sure footedness so one can avoid falling rocks.
"The Lord will be your confidence and will keep your foot from being caught." Psalm 3:26
"When you walk your steps will not be hindered and when you run, you will not stumble." Proverbs 4:12
Did I mention thorns? Bushes everywhere along the path, some are beautiful and some are not. (I planted a Beautiful Bush in my yard last year, it buds as I type.)

Shocked I just realized this thread is in original writing, hmm. I'll move my post if you like. I wasn't planning on quoting the bible when I started typing. <scratches head>

The low road. Easier of course, not steep, less crags and hills to climb, more people to hang around with, but less gems and expansive views are few.

It's the high road for me!

Are we allowed to quote other sources in original writing? I honestly don't know.
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