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Sneak Attack (revised)

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jjorge
 
Reply Sat 26 Mar, 2005 02:18 am
This is a revised version of a little poem I wrote two years ago.





'Sneak Attack'


What makes me smile ?
Spring's sneak attack:

Seven forsythias
blazing yellow,

Undaunted daffodils
blazing back!

(jjorge)
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 27 Mar, 2005 03:34 pm
marking with a yellow flower, jjorge.
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CodeBorg
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 04:13 pm
Seasons overthrown, flowers revolt?
What life lacks in numbers it makes up
in the shock and awe of tactical pollen.
Run for your hives!
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