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Reply Sun 20 Mar, 2005 10:42 am
"Could I be the carrier of the key to the lock
that holds your heart?"


I'm half asleep, but I can feel myself
thinking about you.
My wandering mind is captivated by an
intenseness that even I can't identify.

A raw beauty surrounds my every move, and I am
touched by the feel.
It's you, beside me, inside me, my heart,
soul, and mind.

Over powering my thoughts, the answers to
questions are lingering.
Could you be the carrier of the key to the
lock that holds my heart?

Given a chance, time will follow through...
giving truth to the art of imagination.
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 04:43 pm
Thought-provoking ...
What if each of us carries the key to our own heart,
but sometimes need another to help
find where we put it.

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so
thinking of the other just mirrors and discovers
our own selves. Our own key.


But then, such beautiful words ... are you sure the lock
on your heart isn't already open?? Is a key needed
at all?

Mmm... I'll have to think some more...
Thanks!
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 06:18 pm
Haha...it's funny you ask about my heart....lol.....you must not have read much of my stuff......In the a2k search bar, type in (title) "cold hard truth"...(Auther)..."Stand up for pessimism"....in it, you will find a peice of what my heart holds. Thanks for posting, I really appreciate it.
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