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The Boy I Didn't Know

 
 
jackie
 
Reply Fri 28 Feb, 2003 07:40 pm
The Boy I Didn't Know

Some always laughed a little, when he went by.
Not always, but there's times when he would cry.

It was the faltering gait, I think- plain slow!
Still, it seemed he had a body set to go!

Too, the hair that waved- (at each other's what I mean).
To tell the truth, he didn't look that clean.

There was no smell… at least none I could scent,
(But I'm not the kind to gossip on a gent.)

I saw him with a red rag at his face- and knew
That kerchief hid his mis'ry with the place.

We rode out on a chartered bus, you see;
To a park that had a big, ol' saved up tree.

We, most, were running up the trails and round,
While he just arched to keep from falling down.

His fingers hurt, I think- the way he clutched.
First one he rubbed, and then the other touched.

That far-gone look that lingered in his eyes.
Gave rise to guessing where his memory lies.

A shake and now, or there he'd do a twitch…
It looked SO LIKE a beggar with the ?'itch'.

I'd like'd to help him bend, that day, and scrape
Against whatever demons made him ache.

From ?'hind my trifling' wishes comes a frightful ?'mewl'
Convincing him, if guessing- he'd met another fool.

Stumbling on what words would let him know I would
Be like a friend, so help me. If I only could.

While we stand there ?'reaching' for what other's got
The poor thing stumbled backward, and pants fell on that spot.

He clung to me - with such a GLARE on his scared brow.
And I was Glaring worse than him, to what I'm seeing now.

His legs bound round with rusting chains, which had been cut apart;
And scars and blue marks up and down, like ugly toilet ?'art'.

The shirt ran up his back when stooped, I could see the same.
I wrenched my neck to turn my head, away from all his shame.

Now, ever' sneer he ever took- I want it took away.
I wont forget how PAIN did look, until my dyin' day!
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LarryBS
 
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Reply Mon 3 Mar, 2003 11:20 pm
I liked it, thanks jackie.
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Diane
 
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Reply Tue 4 Mar, 2003 10:33 pm
Thank you Jackie. I would dearly love to know the story behind the heartbreaking poem.
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