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Sat 12 Mar, 2005 08:39 am
headlights like fairies
flickering through dark skies
Silence - 1000 leagues deep
gasping for breath through gritted teeth
tears like razorblades slicing pale cheeks
Don't say a word He said
you might let out the lions
to snarl and pounce
with heavy lids
and sharp nails making moons
in my fingertips
Your thoughts could swallow the world - whole
in a blazing inferno
one distant memory of sorrow
Hands shaking like church mice
my indiscretions rising
and all the cries of innocence dying
Still I never said a word
From where do you impart such gripping and powerful enegy, Foreveruntilitends??
I read all you have written, searched your profile for a bio- but you give no clue to the "you".
There are many profoundly intense scenarios from which your evocative emotion could be drawn... REALLY captures my attention.
Good writing.
thank you..I write about things that i have experianced, which have affected me or touched me deeply. In both good and horrible ways.
I have never been able to show my emotions to others very well, most know me as the nice girl who is allways smiling; but when I write it all just seems to come out..it grips me so to speak.
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