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ForeverUntilItEnds
 
Reply Mon 7 Mar, 2005 06:23 pm
Her fingers pale
long talons bare
and baring still
that lazy smirk
a knowing look
what's mine not hers
is throbbing there
beneath a touch
it's come to this
I saw the need
in eyes like mine
in eyes once mine
but not for me
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apoeticinjustice
 
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Reply Tue 8 Mar, 2005 08:52 am
I especially like the last three lines...well done!
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