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On the roadside

 
 
Reply Sat 5 Mar, 2005 04:52 pm
I bought a heart for you today
bruised and battered, it was half price
amongst the laughing clowns and books
nestled deep in forlorn shadows

The dealer grinned and upped the cost
must have been the hope in these eyes
a penny more a penny less
all found in gutters by grimy hands

I loaned him a smile then walked away
a heavy burden but light the step
this purchase wary on my mind
how I hope that it will fit...



feedback and criticism definately welcome Smile
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Scraps
 
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Reply Sat 5 Mar, 2005 06:00 pm
that was some deep **** man
i liked it though
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ElysianFields
 
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Reply Sat 5 Mar, 2005 07:55 pm
if it doesn't fit, may i have it? i might have use for it Wink
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ElysianFields
 
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Reply Sat 5 Mar, 2005 07:58 pm
you haven't found me elsewhere yet
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apoeticinjustice
 
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Reply Tue 8 Mar, 2005 08:57 am
very good

In the long run, bruised and battered hearts tend to be more valuable than the fresh and untried ones! lol
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ForeverUntilItEnds
 
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Reply Tue 8 Mar, 2005 12:57 pm
hehe, i do agree Wink
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