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Thu 17 Feb, 2005 10:53 pm
Since I first saw your face, you've had me mesmerized
And I'd do anything to travel to the depths of your eyes
You captivate me, nothing short of infatuate me
And admiring your beauty has become a habit lately
That's just what happens baby, you're so fun to hang with
And to call you gorgeous would be such an understatement
My heart, you hold captive, for you, I've been bad cause
I'm not like them other niggas, they think I'm old-fashioned
Introduced in a strange way, met in the same way
Spoke to you the first time, felt you the same day
It's not hard to see your beauty inside and out
And for you? I'd give anything without the slightest doubt
This might sound odd, we still getting to know each other
Nothing will make me happier if you show me love, but
You take it slow, yeah you don't want to rush
This is love baby, yeah this is way past a lust
This is my Love Letter, better yet my Letter of Love
Dedicated to that special person that's ever In Love
This confession is a message I can never give up
Every sentiment I meant it in this Letter of Love
Yeah, it'd be awkward if I told you how I felt inside
With only one glance from you, I just melt inside
You're so beautiful, don't let anyone tell you otherwise
I love your personality, love your smile, and love your eyes
I'm not like them other niggas, I said this before
But my pristine view of you will never distort
If you were down, I'd do anything to make you better
Take my hand baby, we can face the day together
We can tackle any foe that dare comes before us
We can take this relationship and make it something gorgeous
I promise to love you better, I'm a man of my words
Damn, I get what half of men deserve
How could I be so lucky? You always get the best of me
I can't help but think that an angel was sent to me
Cause no woman has ever made me feel this way
Just one passing thought and words fill the page
It's like when I'm around you, I just want to be nice
When I think of you, inspiration comes at a cheap price
I wouldn't think twice, to treat you the best that I can
Anything else would make me feel like less of a man
My priorities? I'll put you above myself
Give me a chance, I'll love you more than I love myself
How many times have you stunned me? More than one instance
You're not like them other girls, there's sort of a difference
You're nothing short of a princess, I'll treat you royally
I'll give you two honors of mine: my love and my loyalty
I'll give you more than I've givin anyone prior
I'll travel any distance and I'll walk through the fire
Now, I called you a princess, but you'd make a better queen
Is it true that I met the girl who was meant for me at nineteen?
I got a lot on my mind, I'm being redundant
But I can't get you out of my head, and baby I love it
So how much longer can I take it? Not long
You're a beautiful serenade and I'm a sucker for soft songs
I'm amazed at how hard I fell
All it takes is a glance and my heart will swell
Will it last? Hard to tell, but I don't doubt, boo.
I've never been with you, but I find it hard to live without you
I have to say it again, I love your eyes
And as long as I'm with you, my thoughts will never subsidize
I don't know if our future holds nearer sons or daughters
I don't know if our future holds turbulent or stormy waters
All I know is every second I'm with you my heart is pounding
I'll traverse the roughest terrain, conquer the fathers
Now I'm Diff-er-ent, my love is In-fin-ite,
Baby, I'll stand by you through Thick-?'n-thin
I'll stand by you through sun-soaked beaches to stormy weather
So baby girl, here's to getting to know you better
so nobody liked tha drop or wat
Hey giv someone a chance to reply!

It's cool for what it is - not really my kinda thing but if it was i'd like it if you see what i mean. It's written pretty well
my bad i jus wanted to see wat ppl thought of it
it was tha first 1 i did in that kinda flow
thanks for tha feed though
so its jus bekaboo reply'n
should i jus stick wit tha battles?
Pretty good. I like it. The first lines are really good.
thanks i liked it to maybe ill do a lil more of these than battle'n
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