Reply
Thu 17 Feb, 2005 08:04 pm
Here's my latest one. You can interpret this many ways, though I'll give a brownie point to the person who names the intended meaning. S any critiques qould be appreciated.
When the Stone Hits the Ground
It will free all imprisoned
In this wretched prison cell
And put inside the builder
And the gatekeeper as well.
It will feed all that are willing,
With hope that can't be matched
By your lies and your deceits
That don't add up but just subtract.
It will mutilate the temple,
Rip apart its mighty throne
That was built on empty promises
With you, the corner stone.
Watch the Temple crumble!
Watch it all fall down!
And the louder the better
When the stone hits the ground
And the minions they will flee
From the thunderous sound
That will echo through the heavens
When the stone hits the ground
And the burden will be lifted
To free our people and our town
And the ignorance shall perish
When the stone hits the ground
So, watch the Temple crumble!
Watch the dusty cloud!
From the rubble and ruins
When the stone hits the ground.
i dont no wat it means but it was sick though