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Sun 13 Feb, 2005 08:57 pm
What I see is ugly
Your attitude disgusts me
Your persona is fake
and I can't take your lies.
When I see your face
It's such a disgrace
And I don't wanna pretend
I like you.
So drown yourself
In all your sorrows
You will see no more
Tomorrows, with me.
Certain words should NEVER be paired for rhyme, in my opinion. They are, Walk/Talk, Face/Disgrace, and Die/Cry. Just my thoughts.
Well, i guess that all depends on how you choose to read it, in my mind it works well! Thanks for your thoughts though!
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