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Sun 13 Feb, 2005 01:01 am
I got this song stuck in my head
it starts and ends the same.
It's about a boy who loves a girl.
They were so close yet so far.
He waited forever just to see a passing glance.
Crying eyes, and open wounds.
The days grow so long and the minutes never stop.
I long for it to pass to be with you.
Time is in a stand still, and I hate it so.
I wish to see you and crave your touch...
Waking terror, and cold sweats.
I woke this morning without your touch.
I woke this morning, alone and scared.
I need you to be there when I wake.
When I'm scared. When i'm all alone.
I need you to tell me you love me.
But most of all I need you to believe in me.
Wow, i really liked this poem. I don't have any outstanding ideas for a title...but would like to know what you come up with. I have a few ideas if it were my poem......but I think a title has to come from the creator...Sorry! VERY GOOD!