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Friends have asked for one of my poems, so here goes.

 
 
InjunKB
 
Reply Sun 23 Feb, 2003 10:30 am
Seers


Some seek imperceivable light,
hoping to span shadows of the night.
Some seek to understand
Eyes of Nostradamus,
where vision mingles with man.
Some seek to pick the locks
pouring out Pandora's Box.
Some covet the coastline of second sight.
Others are haunted by beacons in the night.

Distorted reflections or distant train whistles
create projections of hollow images,
flickering at uncertain speeds,
superimposed across alternative realities.

~


You don't tell anyone;
fight sleepless nights alone;
feel like a circus freak.
You certainly don't prostitute
yourself out to the "psychic network."

You can't turn it on with a switch;
can't control who you see,
when,
what,
where.

You can't prevent what you've seen;
you can't stop what you see;
can't call it only a dream.

You can't ignore it;
you can't turn it off.

~

Lingering in translucent portals
in dimensions divided by dreams
you search to recognize landmarks
on the crossroads of comprehension,
kiss friends goodbye in airports
knowing you will never see them again,
and return to turbulent sleep
hoping, perchance, not to dream.

KB 1993
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jespah
 
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Reply Sun 23 Feb, 2003 10:49 am
Excellent, and welcome! :-D

PS Love the avatar.
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jackie
 
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Reply Sun 23 Feb, 2003 11:06 am
Dear InjunKB,

You say it well.... Poignant!
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InjunKB
 
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Reply Mon 24 Feb, 2003 05:36 pm
Thank you
The avatar is the medicine man from Tumbleweeds.
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jackie
 
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Reply Mon 24 Feb, 2003 06:22 pm
I recognize him now, InjunKB. I like funny papers and read them all SOME of the time.
Tumbleweeds is a clever comic strip, very entertaining.
Again, I read your poem- and it is stirring....and I can relate to it's message. (At least the one it lends to me.)
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 2 Mar, 2003 05:32 am
Hey, InjunKB,

Welcome to AK2 and I really hope to see more of your poetry. I do need more time to go back and reread it, however, but my spontaneous reaction was one that provoked an image of Hank Williams', "I'm so Lonesome I could Cry."
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InjunKB
 
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Reply Thu 1 May, 2003 10:44 am
Wow, to be compared to Hank
I am truly flattered.
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mabon52
 
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Reply Tue 6 May, 2003 11:09 pm
The poem is wordy and overwrought.Let it flow naturally.Don't write for an audience,write for yourself.That said,there is great potenial here.Good luck.
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