Reply Fri 28 Jan, 2005 10:05 am
Memory.

Nostalgia creeps in, unbidden
forbidden
why does the past
torture us so?
Mother to fate
sister to future
we are restrained
by it's controlling force,
driving us close
to the edge of insanity's cliff
We wish
to be freed;
and yet, we may not
until we have confronted it
controlled it
made it part of us
then,
we are truly ready to face our future
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Fri 28 Jan, 2005 04:54 pm
Wow, I really liked it. I liked the fact that it was full of despair and also that, you faced your future. And forced it into yourself. Well done!
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Reply Fri 28 Jan, 2005 06:18 pm
Thanks.
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