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Mon 24 Jan, 2005 07:55 pm
A faithful follower
stares straight into my eyes
with hope
trust
and care
A piercing look
a defining glare
clouds of smoke
pollute the peaceful air
With hate
my health will diminish
corrode and decay
For these fearful eyes
may or may not see another day
I know my admirer
isnt one
but two
the first will forgive
the other will kill
without hesitation
within it's free will
but why this death
ive stayed true to those close
honest and faithful
am i soon to end?
will the first prevail?
for my sake i hope
for the ships of fate are soon to set sail.
The words are beautiful, but call me simple, I just don't get them lol.
Can you elaborate please. It may be that I'm just missing some connection that would make everything make sense.
No it really isn't clear at all. Basically, it's about a close freind, who is really an entirely differnet person at times. And they have something evil brewing about me I suppose. But the end is about if the good of my freind or the bad will prevail, and my life depends on it.
ok, now things make sense. An interesting idea.
Well at least i know im not goin crazy, haha.
Actually it's pretty obvious what its about. I understood before i even finished.
Quote:I know my admirer
isnt one
but two
the first will forgive
the other will kill
Those lines give it away. Its pretty good poem actualy.
Yeah, that's where I tried to make it apparent. Thanks for the compliment.
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