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Mon 24 Jan, 2005 04:26 pm
Fresh falling snow,
each flake unique.
Those lucky
to cling to branches
join the elite order
of hoarfrost,
laughing at their brethren
below, trampled, shoveled,
driven over,
broken down,
salted
(what are we, caviar?)
until each individual
is crushed
into an unreconizable
brown slush.
An unexpected warm day
proves the equalizer.
I enjoyed reading it Cav...I've been shoveling hoarfrost off my driveway for the last two days now
Dang, it's a nightmare here, and it keeps on coming...
I liked it a lot too, including the dollop of caviar.
I love it, minus the dollop of caviar. The close is strong and magnificent however.
Thanks for the feedback, all.