Clouds, Snow and Mistletoe

Good poem. My Fav. line: Mistletoe, ah, mistletoe how sweet
Symbol of love, yet dangerous to eat. ... I had a chuckle when i read this.

I felt that at times you were stretching to keep with the poem...you seem to be a good poet, so maybe re-read it and cut it down a bit. you have very powerful lines in the poem...and a few less powerful ones...i think that in this case-less is more.

for example:
"It is true that snow is cold
But snowflakes fun to hold". .....maybe not needed
the following line : "Winter only is when it appears
Earths sleeping blanket for the year."....is VERY good.....I like the use of Blanket to describe winter.

Not sure about this line: Snow on the heart makes for a chilling depose
For whom it touches, likewise is its repose."... mabye because the ending words are awkward.

In: "So you see, things could be really bad
Making the heart cold and really sad,"...I would switch the placement of the word be....and make the line "so you see, things could really be bad"....once again- just a thought

In this line: "Yet they are real, both in and out.
Some cast no shadows, some cast doubt."....I would omit the NO in "cast no shadows"....i think it would flow better...or add the word NO to "cast (no) doubt" making it consistent (but thats just me)

all in all....i really did enjoy your poem. I only take the time to give thoughts to poems i like....so please take no offence.