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The Next Stop is -

 
 
Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 08:38 am
The Next Stop


Traveling down this solid space called Earth;
Understanding fully the meaning of "New Birth."

Old is the past, the present is life;
The conscious mind never more to strife.

Embolden of spirit, the flesh its vessel;
Love beyond measure, God's hand is the trestle.

Love - the power that sustains all Heaven and hell;
All in one soul, silent words to tell.

Phantoms of life conquered - The "Commander" has done this.
Bread cannot justify the obedience that deters the abyss.

Peace is knowledge and knowledge is peace;
A renter of Earth, by signing an unseen lease.

The weight is off - the shackles are free;
The destiny of mankind is not MY destiny.

The spirit cleaned of mud, unending prayer - the constant key.
A telescope is a microscope designed for me to see:

Rich beyond riches, is the wealth of refined gold.
A breath here, a morsel there and in peace I am told;

"Walking the Earth, yet traversing the universe I find,

That the next stop is -


The Sub-conscious mind."
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kendrajean32
 
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Reply Thu 3 Feb, 2005 05:24 am
Wow.....i really like the end! Great way to pull it together. My fav. parts are: Love - the power that sustains all Heaven and hell;
All in one soul, silent words to tell.
.....and.....Peace is knowledge and knowledge is peace;

Good job
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truemale
 
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Reply Sat 5 Feb, 2005 11:14 am
Kendrajean32,

Thanks for the wonderful words. I want to inform everyone that "truemale" died Tuesday so there will be no further postings.

His wife, Jean
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