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Mon 17 Jan, 2005 08:59 pm
Windows 2005
I know some days you need me, to buffer you from pain
You take my hand and hold me, like lovers once again
I'm easy and I play your game
While your mind whispers another's name
Well you left a window open
And I dared to look inside
I learned what really mattered
And saw how hard you tried
But that's no comfort for the emptiness
I'm feeling now inside...
Your words rang true, but the window showed me lies
Now we're standing here at arms length, but I avoid your touch
You question with your eyes, does my look say too much?
Let's break the gaze, avert our eyes
I've seen too much, don't be surprised...
If you leave your window open
Dare me to look inside
Try to show me just what matters
And tell me that you tried
It still won't change the words I read
the day my hopes all died...
Words of love meant for another
undenied.
i really like your poem but i'm a litttle confused as to what it is about, any explanation or is it really obvious and im just being dumb ? i think it works really well because its a good length and has a good ryhming scheme, its not one of them poems thats so long and dull u fall asleep half way through.
new_to_the_world_of_guita wrote:i really like your poem but i'm a litttle confused as to what it is about, any explanation or is it really obvious and im just being dumb ? i think it works really well because its a good length and has a good ryhming scheme, its not one of them poems thats so long and dull u fall asleep half way through.
Hello and welcome!
The poem is literally about a woman confirming that someone she loves has another in mind, by reading what he has written on the computer, when he neglects to close a window.
interesting!!! Actually more interesting now that you've explained it.
I too have seen into that window and was sad to see what was in it. Good poem!!
is the poem based on experience?
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