Reply Tue 26 Dec, 2017 07:28 pm
Molds
by iclearwater

The world is full of molds that people realise or unrealise
When people were born, they inevitably were put into molds
Our souls are molded, our behaviours are molded, our values are molded
They are rolling off from the production line one by one

Witnessing those molded souls, I was dreaded to think, "Am I soon to become next one"?
Quivering with fear, I was screaming, "Stop molding me! Stop..."
and I ran away as fast as I could.

What a relief as I thought I've successful escaped
When I turned around,and there's a mirror in front of me
I clearly saw the pallor of a molded square soul inside
She looked into my eyes grimly and pathetically wispered,"Nowhere to run"...

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Reply Tue 26 Dec, 2017 07:45 pm
The above writing of mine has been lying on my computer disk for quite a few days. I was not sure I would like to post it, because English is not my native language. It is about my emotion or feeling after I read a book named Controlling People by American author Patricia Evans. It's my dialogue with an ego named iclearwater in my inner world.

No, I'm not a pessimistic to myself, to my country and to the rest of the world, if I sound like a whining diva in my writintg above, rather I learn to more consciously defense my own self and I learn to appreciate the diversities of people's thoughts and mind.

I think I'm going to read this book again and again and again...
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Reply Tue 26 Dec, 2017 07:53 pm
For typo

What a relief as I thought I've successfully escaped
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