VERSE 1
Ive got a stain on my shirt
and theres a hole in my jeans
Ive got a guilty concious
and impossible dreams
I have seen you love
and i have seen you lie
and ive seen the guilt right in your eyes
Hi, I like what you have in general but think you could add a little more creativity.
How about:
I'm wearing a guilty shirt
and there's a hole in my jeans
I've got a stain on my concsious
and impossible dreams
I have seen you love
and I have felt your lies
and the guilt in your deceitful eyes