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In my eyes you are heaven

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InTraNsiTiOn
 
Reply Sat 15 Jan, 2005 08:16 pm
On a hot day
You are cold water
Splashed upon my face

In the ocean
You are tides
I feel embrace

On the beach
You are shade
from burning hot rays

You are everything
I only imagined
To you I give praise



Note: This was my cheese ball attempt to write something.....thanks for reading!
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Brand X
 
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Reply Sun 16 Jan, 2005 11:01 am
Hey, that's a sweet one!
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zach123
 
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Reply Sun 16 Jan, 2005 03:40 pm
yea its pretty cool
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 16 Jan, 2005 08:00 pm
Well thanks.

Welcom to a2k zach, do you write?
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