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This is powerless

 
 
Reply Fri 14 Jan, 2005 05:06 pm
You push me and pull me
Sick tears I taste
I feel nauseous without you
My eyes can't take light

This addiction, I blame you
You keep me in love
My head is splitting
I can't breathe left alone

Keep me sane
Keep me safe
Keep me alive
Keep me awake

The looks you give me
It's how I feel
Empty and cold
I know I am judged

This night is fading
They say "just for today"
But I can never escape it


This is powerless.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 15 Jan, 2005 08:22 pm
This has great emotion of life and love. Brings back old feelings.....but I think i'll just store them back in the "blocked" file of my head...lol....I liked it, write more!!
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tagged lyricist
 
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Reply Tue 18 Jan, 2005 04:06 pm
sad i think my context is too detached appreciate this poekm fully
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saintabby
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 06:27 pm
what does that mean Tagged?

Thanks for the support, Stand.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 06:44 pm
You can call me pessy!!
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saintabby
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jan, 2005 06:46 pm
pessy it is.
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