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Seed
 
Reply Wed 12 Jan, 2005 02:38 pm
you were my first love
the first day of being honestly happy
the reason of my first sincere smile
you were my first love
the moment I started to care
the one who held me mesmerized
you were my first love

my first love
You i put before myself
you, the one I really listened to
my first love
you made me take a look at myself
you woke me up and made me optimistic
my first love

the love in my heart
helped nothing bother me through the day
helped me sleep without shedding a tear
the love in my heart
helped me to be happy with myself
helped me know life was great
the love in my heart
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Tarah
 
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Reply Thu 13 Jan, 2005 05:02 pm
Seed, I notice the past tense. Whoever she is, you have presumably moved on to a second or even further love.

She still inspires you and I hope she will read this fine poem.
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