Reply Sun 9 Jan, 2005 12:06 am
sinking heaven
burnt trees
carry in the wind
ashes
of the living
;
breathe in/out
sink in/out
sand gathers
time slips
stars plummet to the sea
and the moon bows out gracefully
to the reign of the sun
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Sun 9 Jan, 2005 05:10 pm
Oooh this is so neat... I like your writing style.

Hehe, Greatful Dead Avatar thingie..
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Sun 9 Jan, 2005 05:10 pm
Oooh this is so neat... I like your writing style.

Hehe, Grateful Dead Avatar thingie..
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Rainbow Leprechauns
 
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Reply Sun 9 Jan, 2005 05:11 pm
Oooh this is so neat... I like your writing style.

Hehe, Grateful Dead Avatar thingie..
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askchester
 
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Reply Mon 10 Jan, 2005 08:19 pm
thank you
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