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Sea of Sorrow (in remembrance of the tsunami victims)

 
 
Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2005 10:29 pm
Sea of Sorrow
(in remembrance of the tsunami victims)


Violence tip-toed silently
through heedless doors unsuspected
shadowing existences
as if dousing a candle flame

Gauging loss upon loss
mourning the insurmountable defeat
unfathomed, beneath the eternal tortured shores
of a tragic last ballet

Tears befall the Sea of Sorrow
immersing innocent souls amid undulating waves,
declaring nature's wrath
beyond life's precious passageway

Survivors' tattered hearts
courageously bear a painful journey…
to search among the dead…among poignant pictures...among lifeless children's faces
as all light of hope diminishes

Alone in uncertain countenance
a dream is forever banished
buried deep within the darkened Sea of Sorrow
never to overcome
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 07:48 am
colorbook, that touched me. I especially felt your line: "...tortured shores of a tragic last ballet....". A beautiful epitaph, my friend.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:47 am
This is a wonderful piece, very touching. The imagery is fantastic. Letty chose the same line I was caught by.
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Allsixkindsamusic
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 06:22 pm
The Sea My Ever-Wife
Pani Clour-Book, in my native arrogance my fetishes include Olde English spelling; original, home-make Polish wodka; and blowing fallen ashes to the floor.

Please sweet lady I was a matelot: The Sea is a more beautiful, seductive, perverse bitch-woman than any of flesh. With but one dram of Her-water in my mouth and my blood I know I can never escape Her bondage: my Wives knew and know and hated Her and Her control of Their lives!

I know Her moods and I don't: I love Her and I do not trust Her: She'll suck me this morning and pull me to the bottom at noon; by evening I'll seduce Her once more. Or does she, me, again?

The Sea is an exquisite partner in all my agonising pleasures. She is more seduced and inventive, more loving and loved, more demanding and needed, more satisfying than any Sadist-Mistress; Her organism, her fundamental movement is my death.

The question was posed; the answer is that Woman feels and Man knows. Or we may not.

In the morning a wavelet seduces my tropically relaxed body; in the night an impetuous one tries to digrest me. Without air, I am just Not.

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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 06:32 pm
Another what th

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Allsixkindsamusic
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 06:41 pm
Just Bl99dy Hatched!!!???
I was scraped off a hospital wall 62-some years ago, and still the sweetest sound in my ears is please don't stop!

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msolga
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 06:57 pm
Beautifully expressed, colorbook.
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colorbook
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:34 pm
Thank you Letty, Cav, and msolga...I had a profound need to put my feelings into words.


Allsixkindsamusic, I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say.
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msolga
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:35 pm
You're not alone in that, colorbook.
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Tarah
 
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Reply Thu 13 Jan, 2005 04:48 pm
Colorbook, I've read several poems on this most tragic of events, but yours has reached inside me like no other.

It's a bit like Owen saying "My subject is war and the pity of war. The poetry is in the pity" - your poetry is in the pity of the almost unimaginable loss.
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