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I am hollowed

 
 
Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 06:45 pm
I am hollowed by this pang-- this want
This need
It begins to surface in my mind
Reverbs along these hollow walls
The burning comes slow and fierce
I struggle to break free
Inside it rushes deep
But it quiets down
And soft, like embers
Floating higher and higher
I never lose sight of it
Regardless of time and place
It haunts me here
And my heart begins a faster pace
I try to keep up
But my head spins in this wildness
This fervor
And I'm a hostage to this feeling
As it has me.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 08:43 pm
I like the words.........if only I understood exactly what you mean by them.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 08:43 pm
ohh, welcome to a2k by the way....I look forward to seeing what else you got!!
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stuh505
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2005 10:14 pm
hmm i wonder what feeling it is?
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saintabby
 
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Reply Mon 3 Jan, 2005 07:17 pm
are you guys kidding me? It's kind of blatant!! COME ON! Use your dirty minds! You've got my permission. Wink

Thanks for the warm welcome-- I look forward to being here.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 3 Jan, 2005 07:33 pm
Well, I get the sick mind thing, but I thought maybe it was just my dirty mind......i was trying to look past my dirty mind............I'm gonna shut up now, I don't even make sense anymore...........and i think stuh was joking...........
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saintabby
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:07 pm
yeah, i figured, and I was kidding as well. You're looking out for me though-- that's the important part.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:12 pm
Ok, well cool....now post some more!!!
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saintabby
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 08:18 pm
hey baby, it doesn't happen like that! I need time to prepare-- get the creative juices flowin'-- that or a glass of wine, which ever works.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 5 Jan, 2005 09:02 pm
I hear ya!!!
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