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P-Unit is here

 
 
Reply Wed 29 Dec, 2004 08:53 pm
No need to get all excited
Our rymes is jus so nice dont fight it
But instead youll steal my lines n resight it
Everything we say n do is jus too much
Yall lookin round like bit*hes n such
Our rymes is jus sumtin u cant touch
This is just our opening act
We aint no small gang we travle in a pack
Dont be mad cuz we got sumtin that u lack
Our rymes our Hoes and our skill
u need to listen homie we are pinhead n special J STill

-Yall best watch otu for P-Unit we hotter than any of yas... yall ever wanna rap on a MIC let us kno biatch, we take u anytime, stirght up..
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Slappy Doo Hoo
 
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Reply Wed 29 Dec, 2004 09:38 pm
WESSSSIDE!!!

EASSSSIDE!!!
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littlek
 
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Reply Wed 29 Dec, 2004 10:35 pm
Friend of yours Slappy?
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Slappy Doo Hoo
 
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Reply Thu 30 Dec, 2004 07:54 am
Yes. We roll da hood sippin 40's and smackin bitchez.

You wanna roll, ho?
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littlek
 
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Reply Thu 30 Dec, 2004 10:40 am
hmmm, let me think about that.....
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 30 Dec, 2004 10:59 am
I might suggest changing "nice" in the second line to "sweet." "Nice" is whack, bro, and "sweet" gives you some fine-ass alliteration.
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Slappy Doo Hoo
 
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Reply Thu 30 Dec, 2004 12:38 pm
littlek wrote:
hmmm, let me think about that.....


Yo check it ma' bitch. We hooks u up wit a phat-ass bandana to throw on yo' grill, sum lugz boots anna fresh-fly gold chain fo yo neck.

You's be one gangsta honey.

Aiiiiiiiiiiight!
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littlek
 
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Reply Thu 30 Dec, 2004 10:25 pm
Charight!
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