Reply Tue 28 Dec, 2004 09:16 pm
without you
i feel so lost
i am alone
i feel naked
full of rage
i love you
i can't take it
you want it all
but me by your side
lonely and forlorn
i long for a breath
one so deep
i can finally breathe
i'm trapped
in my own dimension
screaming
to get out
i scratch and fight
to be free
but i adore you
being here....
i'm so lost
i can no
longer see
truth hurts
and lies sting
anger has me
fear paralyzes me
go back
stay
lose yourself
lose control
no conscience
left alone
i cry...
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 558 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
InTraNsiTiOn
 
  1  
Reply Wed 29 Dec, 2004 07:01 am
This reminds me of something I wrote and posted on here at one time! Welcome to a2k!!
0 Replies
 
jaded i think
 
  1  
Reply Wed 29 Dec, 2004 12:46 pm
thanks. it was all over a break up...go figure
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
 
  1. Forums
  2. » LOST
Copyright © 2025 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.05 seconds on 07/31/2025 at 05:19:25