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Inner Voice

 
 
Andrew
 
Reply Fri 14 Feb, 2003 09:08 am
Sometimes we just can't decide
Which path to choose, we need a guide,
Someone to tell us what to do,
A voice that all it says is true,
To guide us through our darkest nights
Helping us back towards the light,
A voice which tells us wrong from right
And lets us keep our goals in sight.

Well I've found a special friend,
He tells me what to do and when,
And leads me towards the luck,
Plus helps me free when i get stuck;
Sit quietly and listen too,
You'll hear your friend whisper to you,
He'll tell you which path to take,
And how to get a lucky break;
So next time you face a choice,
Just listen to your inner voice.

From "Self Expression"
by Andrew Murray
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sweetnpetite
 
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Reply Sat 15 Feb, 2003 06:44 pm
i love it! Very Happy
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Andrew
 
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Reply Sat 15 Feb, 2003 08:58 pm
glad
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Misti26
 
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Reply Sat 15 Feb, 2003 11:20 pm
Laughing
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Winter
 
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Reply Mon 13 Sep, 2004 05:58 pm
Ah Dude. That's not cool. My Inner Voice tells me to lie, steal, cheat, kill, hurt, harm, destroy, scam, lust, plot, and many many other Evil things. So, I must Disagree with this poem only because It makes it sound as if your Inner voice is actually good. I feel sorry for anyone who actually believes that. But hell, maybe I'm lying. *shrugs* All have fell short from the glory. Only one is worthy.

But look on the bright side. At least it Rhymed.
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soaringeagle
 
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Reply Tue 9 Nov, 2004 12:58 am
Made me feel good inside-I like that inner voice! Smile
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witchcraft
 
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Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2004 09:27 am
Smile that's a really cute poem but i think you lack a little impact Smile
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2004 10:11 am
Nice piece. For future reference, if it is your own work, please post it in the 'Original Writing' forum. You will get more feedback there from fellow writers.
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